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MATES ESSAY
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1ST PLACE
Joseph Griggs
An Essay for
Divers Two:
Scuba Diving’s
Magnificent Effects on my MATES Education and my
Life
At the very
moment I took my first breath scuba diving out in
open water, I knew my world had changed forever. Not
only is there a world inside one’s school, home, or
out in parks, forests, and play grounds, there is
also a richly unique, diverse, and beautiful world
in the deep lakes, rivers and oceans just outside of
the world we usually travel. The latter world is an
underwater place, which one can only truly be
immersed in through the wonderful pleasure of scuba
diving. Traveling to and exploring this new world
with my friends at Divers Two has forever reshaped
my education, my anticipated profession, and most
importantly and drastically my personal life and
enjoyment.
At the Marine
Academy of Technology and Environmental Science
(MATES) the science curriculum is centered largely
on marine and aquatic biological and ecological
studies. Scuba diving is the only real opportunity
to provide one’s self with the chance to experience
hands on the spectacular creatures and environments
of our studies. An aquarium keeps aquatic life
locked in a tank 10 or 15 feet away from people, not
even allowing one to see an animal in its real
habitat. Scuba diving submerses one directly into
the habitat of the creatures of study and lets one
observer up close how the animal lives, feeds, and
interacts with the real organisms and environment
around it. Only scuba diving can enhance the
learning experience in a way that is so truly
exciting and enjoyable.
The experience
of scuba diving lasts a lifetime and opens up many
professional career opportunities for one’s future.
There are commercial jobs that range from underwater
construction and maintenance to search, salvage, and
recovery jobs along with a plethora of other similar
careers that exist in any type of open water
imaginable. Apart from some of these more obvious
careers, scuba diving has personally given me access
to a wide variety of other career fields.
Side-by-side with the studies of MATES is the idea
of doing one’s own incredible biological and
ecological research for the sake of science. Without
scuba diving I would never have been able to dream
of researching and understanding advanced and
complicated ecosystems off shore and devising ways
to protect them as well as use their resources
wisely and efficiently to better our world. Using
submarine scuba related technology I would explore
deep uncharted waters and find new life forms and
ecosystems. Thanks to scuba diving being my key to
an unimaginably unique future career, these ideas
and options, far fetched to some, are sitting right
at my future’s doorsteps.
The most
important impact of scuba diving is how it affects
one in a personal way. Today and in my future, scuba
diving will always be one of my most unique and
exhilarating hobbies. No other activity will ever
match up to the never ending opportunity for
exploration and discovery at a physical and
spiritual level that scuba diving offers. The very
vast and distinct worlds that I will be able to
immerse myself in throughout the rest of my life
will forever be a physically relaxing and emotional
escape from the world I live in as I write this.
Scuba diving offers a never ending expanse of
knowledge and excitement to indulge in for personal
pleasure.
The effect
scuba diving has had on my life is more significant
than most other events in my lifetime. It has
supplemented my education by expanding the area from
which I can draw a wealth of knowledge from as well
as making my education substantially more
entertaining and exciting. It has opened countless
doors of future careers for me that would have
otherwise been entirely unattainable. Last, scuba
diving has opened to me one of my personally most
enjoyable hobbies that will entertain and excite me
for the rest of my life to come.
2ND PLACE
Sean Mautone
Scuba diving is an
extraordinary experience that changes the lives of
its participants. Anyone who dives will talk about
the exhilarating rush of being able to breathe
underwater and explore the ocean’s many secrets.
Diving can only have a positive influence on my
experience at MATES, opening up a world once
unavailable and mysterious to me.
As its
name states, MATES is a marine biology school.
Diving provides the opportunity to observe the
creatures being studied at a more personal level,
giving me a better understanding of how the numerous
animals interact in their natural environment. To
learn a subject or concept from text books, can be
limiting. There’s no equal to getting hands on
experience. Diving allows one to gain that
experience. Scuba diving has the potential to take
my education to a whole new level.
I have always been fascinated by animals, and have
enjoyed the adventures of exploring their
environments and habitats. Up until now, though, I
have only been able to see animals that make land
their home, and not the multitude of species that
thrive under water. With diving I can now see that
missing element and the way that its inhabitants
behave in their natural environment. It’s like a
whole new world has been opened for me and I now
have twice the excitement, twice the adventure. I
feel as if it’s Christmas morning and there is a
load of presents next to the tree waiting to be
unwrapped. I have an entire new world to explore and
see in its natural state.
Diving will allow me to pursue a great new hobby
that will last my entire life. I will be able to
participate in the many exciting activities
associated with diving such as spearfishing,
lobstering, underwater photography, and
exploration. It will change how I see places
close to home, such as Barnegat Bay and the
Jersey Shore. But, it will also influence how I
view the world and its oceans and seas. I am
used to seeing the ocean and bay as a place
where people congregate to swim and play during
the summer months. With scuba diving I will see
it as another world, teeming with life, which
needs to be protected from increasing factors of
pollution and destruction. Through a better
understanding of our marine environment, I will
be able to aid in its protection from
environmental issues.
To
be able to incorporate diving into a future
career will have far reaching benefits. A
career, like marine biology, that allows me to
pursue things that I find enjoyable and exciting
such as the adventures of exploring the habitat
of my subjects. I find it amazing to be able to
get a paycheck for doing something I enjoy. My
parents once said work is not work if its fun.
To be diving at such a young age only enhances
my desire to pursue this career, a career that
could benefit the oceans, and animals we live
with. Many kids in high school can be confused
about their futures and where they are heading
in life, but now that I have sampled what diving
is all about, I can not wait to achieve the
goals I believe are my future. I believe my
future profession will only benefit from diving
and all that it brings.
I feel that scuba diving will have a very
positive effect on my life, both inside and
outside the classroom walls. It will allow me to
enhance my education of the marine ecosystems
and how they work in unison to thrive in the
various conditions they are faced with. It will
give me more of a chance to assist in protecting
and preserving our numerous bodies of water from
pollution and other environmental hazards. Scuba
diving will also give me an opportunity to
follow my dream of becoming a marine biologist.
3RD PLACE
Joe Convery
Scuba Diving: A Gateway of Knowledge
One may think of scuba as just a dive
into a large puddle of water. Others think of scuba
as a gateway to another world; a world filled with
exotic life and mysteries. Scuba is a very important
factor in the education of youth all across the
globe. In my MATES education, scuba will and already
has aided in furthering my knowledge of aquatic life
and aspects.
Scuba teaches young adults time
management as well as other skills that are
useful all throughout your life. As part of the
course requirements, you must take an exam for
each chapter you need to read, as well as a
final exam that covers all the chapters you have
read. As part of the scuba course, you need to
find out how to pace yourself with your
workload. Between the MATES schoolwork and the
scuba work, there would normally be no time for
any side activities unless you find time to
manage. By pacing yourself, you can deal with
the work at MATES as well as complete the work
in scuba book. Pacing yourself has other
advantages; for example, when you read slowly
and in smaller amounts, you will retain the
information a lot better than if you were to
cram and read all the information quickly the
night before the test on the material.
Scuba educates the youth of today
with environmentally safe plans that will help
you have fun as well as help preserve the
environment. Scuba also educates on the marine
life of all organisms in the seas. Hands on
activities are the best way to learn a certain
trade or to learn more about a certain idea. As
seen in our science classes at MATES, labs are
hands on activities that help students
understand the concept or theory that is trying
to be expressed. Hands on activities are a major
learning tool, and scuba diving is the ultimate
learning tool. For many biology classes, going
into the field to do studies is the best kind of
learning and or research that can be done. Scuba
diving not only takes you into the field, it
helps you observe hidden factors that you
wouldn’t normally see above the water. When
identifying species or observing currents and
waves, scuba diving takes you right into the
action to help you learn. Scuba diving requires
planning so you know your boat will not
accidentally appear on an island hidden under
the water, or beached due to a nasty current
that took it five miles from the ending site.
Scuba diving also allows a clear view of animals
in their distinct habitats. Above the surface,
mostly remnants of deceased organisms are found;
however in the sea this is a different story.
Under the water, you get to see living organisms
behaving as they would in their natural
environment. Researching this way can prove
useful in deciding which bait to use while
fishing or even where you can collect the best
shells on the beach.
In the future, scuba diving helps
the better development of today’s youth. In the
future, having a better knowledge of the sea
will help in the career development of today’s
youth. Jobs are always looking for environmental
concerns and solutions, so scuba diving can help
in producing environmental consultants. Also,
scuba will help people who are considering
careers in the marine field. Many biologists
choose to work in the field above and under the
water. Studying organisms in their natural
habitats require both. It is very useful to have
the ability to just waltz into the field and be
able to submerge yourself to research an
endangered species of clams. The life skills
learned during scuba are very useful as well.
Previously, I mentioned how time management and
better learning techniques are taught through
the scuba program. These skills are valued
highly in multimillion dollar corporations and
can help in just about any career. If there’s a
deadline to be met, one who has completed the
scuba program will be able to meet it, and get
something out of it as well.
Scuba diving is a gateway for
knowledge and research. Scuba helps you develop
life skills as well as great research practices.
Scuba has helped and is still helping the youth
of today advance not only mentally, but
physically as well. All the planning that goes
into a dive plays into your safety and the
safety of others. Scuba diving teaches you to
plan into the future, and chart a course for
your own success. Applying all of the skills
learned through scuba diving, the product is a
well rounded pupil that is ready to take on the
world, from the bottom up.
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